So I uh, am actually getting to the fun part of this rpf I’m writing. I put it under a read more because I know rpf weirds some people out. But anyway, I wanted to share a sample to get some feedback, see what you guys think. So here goes! (And yeah feedback would be much appreciated).
Ben lunges forward and crushes his lips against the other man’s, cutting off his speech before it can get anymore ridiculous. David stiffens in surprise, and then pulls back a fraction to glance worriedly at Ben.
“Ben,” he breathes, the name hopeful and despairing all at once. He looks a bit shocked. “Are you sure this is a good idea?” His brown eyes are wide and he’s panting slightly, pulse jumping in the side of his neck.
Ben looks up at him, at this man who is so good and honest and would choose even now to do whatever he thought was best for Ben’s well-being, and feels. “David,” Ben replies softly, “I think this is an excellent idea,” and then his lips are back on David’s, right where they belong.
David hesitates a fraction of a second, then sighs in defeat as Ben continues to caress his lips. His arm drops from the back of the sofa to curl around Ben’s shoulders, bringing him closer, as he lets out a low groan that manages to reverberate throughout Ben’s entire body. Ben moans in response and deepens the kiss, parting his lips to lick his way into the other man’s mouth. David tastes of whiskey and smells like sin and it’s intoxicating and delicious and Ben thinks dazedly that he probably will never ever get enough. He moves the hand that’s been cupping David’s face up to tangle his fingers into that glorious mess of hair, kneading and sliding through the dark strands even as David slides his other arm around Ben’s waist, bringing him even closer.
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